雅思写作范文(2007。02。03)
Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table shows the results of a survey in 2004 which asked undergraduate and postgraduate students of a UK university whether they were satisfied with the facilities at the university.
You should write at least 150 words
Area Students Very satisfied Quite satisfied Not at all satisfied
Study facilities Postgraduate students 65% 20% 15%
Undergraduate students 67% 17% 16%
University cafeteria Postgraduate students 52% 32% 16%
Undergraduate students 70% 27% 3%
Social facilities Postgraduate students 80% 15% 5%
Undergraduate students 45% 25% 30%
Response to 07.02.03 Writing Task 1
The diagram gives a breakdown about different attitudes among undergraduate and postgraduate students towards equipments of a UK college in 2004.
While being questioned about the contentment of study facilities, two groups of students (both graduate and undergraduate) seemed to share the same point of view, where approximately 85% of both students (two thirds of them showed their thorough support) expressed their satisfaction, leaving only around 15% students feeling in an opposite way.
However, divergence emerged among college students and students who were after Master’s Degree when it came to questions about the school catering service and social establishment. The majority of university undergraduates (97%) favored the college canteen, whereas 16% of postgraduates, 13% higher than their university counterparts, showed their reluctance. On the contrary, undergraduates appeared to be more complaining about social facilities, with 30% students announcing their dissatisfaction which exceeded the proportion of criticism within graduate students by 25%.
Overall speaking, most of the UK college students had a high comment on the campus appliance, yet undergraduates tended to be relatively harsher than graduate students.